Monitoring - Amending my first mock-up

 I found that during the mock-up process my first mock-up was very successful and so there wasn't lots of amendments to make. I used the feedback I gained from the focus groups I conducted and also some personal evaluation points whilst amending my mock-up.
The first thing that I changed is that I changed the introduction section so that it was all in one paragraph and looked more clear and together rather than the previous two columns which initially looked a bit confusing and weird.
I also changed the arrangement of the oats and rice sections on the second page which were also arranged in an unclear manner, so that they are now in two clear columns. The meal ideas are also now directly below each main paragraph, and the two columns are now colour co-ordinated, to make the distinction even clearer.
I then replaced the pictures taken off the internet that I had used for the mock-up because I hadn't remembered to transfer all of my own pictures onto my college account. I had to first replace the circle shaped pictures of food on the first page, and the pictures of nuts, the picture of the energy drink is yet to be replaced as I will be taking pictures for this in my photo shoot next week.
I then went on to create the third page of my mock-up with included the last two sections of my article. I followed the same techniques as I had done for my first to pages for continuity, I found the effective, and made the page look professional, and it also took me much less time because I already knew how everything was going to look and what to do.
I found this stage of production fairly easy because there were only a few minor changes to be made, and the new pictures that I imported were good pictures, I took care when taking them and I feel I photoshopped them well meaning they looked professional and clear when put them in the article. Also I worked quickly as I was replicating techniques I had already used and I was confident using InDesign.